Surrender on a Summer Night
In utter silence, asking nothing in return, I fulfill your most intimate wishes, whispering words of liquid passion. On the thread of an almost-forgotten world, I write poems with gloved hands, and...
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FairEllen ~ You caught me totally offguard in your ending, but I guess that is what your intentions were. *clapping* This just flows so nicely, so beautifully.....it's that finale that got me! I...
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A twist at the end of this lovely poem FairEllen that caught be by surprise. Regards, Maryse
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giving, yet not fully submitting so much strength and frustration!
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~Ellen~ You really WOW me with this one sweet friend ~ Sooo beautifully brushed & a most enjoyed read today :)
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Thank you all so much for your generous responses to this poem. Much appreciated.
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Sweet friend...I was unprepared for the ending..........beautifully spilled.
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On the thread of an almost-forgotten world, I write poems with gloved hands, and come to walk beneath the rising moon There's some amzzing images in this one, FairEllen...your words are deeply felt...
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lol Miss Ellen ~ You have always struck me as the most elegant and tasteful of ladies BUT ... You have a cheeky side ! :) Much much enjoyed :)
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Lou Thank you for your comment on the closing lines. I always strive for good ending thoughts and words.
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Looks like you got all of us by surprise on your ending Ellen, not only is that a sigh of wonderful writing, but it also takes poetry to that diferent realm where the reader remembers the poem long...
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Wonderful images said in few words. Just beautiful Ellen and a ncie twist ending...love it*hugs*
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Such a gorgeous piece with an underlying sandess at the end? I dunno, maybe my mind's just working too hard. :) But I adore this piece nonetheless. ^_^ ~Tiff
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Bri Thank you for your kind words. When I wrote this poem some time ago, the ending lines took me by surprise too! I think they just jumped off the pen when I wasn't looking. Mnay thanks.
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echo the appreciation of the close............enjoy the surrender of your spill.................
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lady most fair.... sigh In utter silence, asking nothing in return, I fulfill your most intimate wishes, whispering words of liquid passion. On the thread of an almost-forgotten world, I write poems...
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beautiful poetry FairEllen although I can't help wondering about the gloved hands??
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Miss Ellen, Oh my!! lol Keep that pen, and keep it handy. This is one of the best. Joe
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a step into the extraordinary Ellen I wanted to quote the same as Lost xxx Liz
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Karen Thank you for your generous response. I struggled with that ending and still feel it's not quite right. But I ran out of muse!!
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